On Thursday 22nd February, P4 went on a visit to Dynamic Earth as part of our Climate topic. When we returned to school, we wrote simile poems about our experience.
Dynamic Earth
The rainforest room was as beautiful as blue eyes sparkling in the light,
As loud as thunder booming across the sky,
As tropical as mangoes, bananas, passion fruit and dragon fruit on a hot summers day,
And as green as a snake slithering through the trees.
The iceberg room was as cold as a freezer in the snow,
As white as a polar bears’ fur, fluffy and snowy,
As wet as the tundra and Arctic sea,
As tall as a giraffe at Edinburgh Zoo.
The volcano room smelt as smoky as a fire, red, orange and yellow,
As shaky as hundreds of wood peckers attacking an oak tree,
It felt as hot as an oven on the sun,
It was as fun as a rollercoaster at Disneyland going upside down.
By Lucy
Dynamic Earth
In the volcano room it was as dark as a shadow underneath my bed,
The lava looked as hot as my dinner fresh out of the oven,
The room was as noisy as a big circus performance,
I could smell the smoke like burnt toast.
The iceberg room was as cold as Mount Everest,
As wet as a puddle on a sad, rainy day,
The iceberg is as huge as a giant,
And as cool as a cucumber.
By Ethan
Dynamic Earth
The volcano room was as dark as a summer night,
As shaky as a rocket blasting off,
As warm as a fire,
The lava was as bright as the sun.
The iceberg was as cold as the Oriam,
As wet as milk,
As slimy as a slug,
The baby polar bear video is as cute as a kitten.
By Millie
Dynamic Earth
In the iceberg room it was as cold as the Arcitc,
The iceberg was as slimy as a cucumber,
It is as big as a cloud,
The room was as quite as a library.
The volcano room was as dark as midnight,
The lava was as hot as a fiery star up in the sky,
The floor shook like a washing machine,
The lava flowed like the sea and gurgled like a monster in the ocean.
By Amber
Currie Primary School 
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